Daddy, I miss You

• Artist: Ember Delano
• Description: I wrote this after I lost my dad in a car accident to help me get through it all. I hope you like it and I would love any type of feed back on it good or bad. Thank You.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: daddy miss

Daddy, you left us so fast
I can't even remember when we had spoke last
A yellow ribbon and flowers that will never die
Mark the place where you left our lives
Daddy, Mommy won't stop crying
Each day I feel that inside she's dying
She lost her dad when she was young
Now I've lost you...but all I can do is bite my tongue
Daddy, I miss you...
We all do

Comments

[Poetic Progression]

If my dad is gone, I'd never see the light of day again...beautiful poem.

[nerdist11]

I wish I could understand how you feel but my dad is a bum in jail very sweet thuogh.

[Asebi]

omg so beuatiful moving and sad crying

[concrete_girl_luvves]

Oh!!!! crying thats so sad! its an awesome peom and very moving...

[Knight154]

This is a very moving and emotional piece. Lovely but truly sad.

[The Darke Assassin]

Wow, that brought me to tears. I haven't lost my dad, but I'm sure it would be the same for me. I have always been closer to him then my mom. It was very emotion filled which I believe is that point.