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I want to be perfect
To those I love best
I want to be beautiful
To all the rest
I want everyone to know me
The world to care who I am
I want to be who I dream to be
With white wings and a silk gown
It’s not going to happen though
I’m none of the above
At least that’s what I thought
Until I fell in love
He told me I was everything
Filled my heart with so much love
I felt like I wanted to sing
I was in love!
Sadness is still alive though
It tries to knock us down
Sometimes I fell my heart breaking
Reality still comes ‘round
Then suddenly my senses return
I realize how small I am
He tells me I’ll never learn
…But what does he mean?
Once more I’m in his arms again
My heart feeling ready to bleed
He kisses me on the lips
Tells me I’m everything he could ever need
He wipes away my tears
Makes him sad to see me cry
He hushes all my fears
Promises he’ll always be there
I’m not good enough
I look up with ashamed eyes
Thinking I was beautiful
I was just living lies
A strange look is in his eyes
He grabs my hand
And then I realize
All the confidence I’d kept inside
He pulls me close
And cups my face
Kisses my lips
It makes my heart race
He tells I’m more than a friend
If we were to break up
Neither of our hearts would mend
I know now how wrong I’ve been
I let my eyes fall close
Listing to his heart
He’s kept me close form that minute
Our love itself is a work of art
- by Avatar Aero |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: I Want to be Perfect
- Artist: Avatar Aero
- Description: This is a poem I wrote about a year ago and I'm finally pleased with my revisions to it now. I wrote if for my boyfriend to let him know about how thankful I am for the confidence he gives me.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: want perfect love confidence
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Emilie_Aututmn - 06/24/2009
- Who gives a ******** about "rhyming?" If it has RHYTHM it works. This has rhythm. It's very nice.
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- dee32693 - 12/11/2008
- this is very good however you did lose your flow of rhyming a few times here and there. but besides that, very nice.
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- tom_boy_mauh - 12/09/2008
- 5000/5
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- tom_boy_mauh - 12/09/2008
- 5000/5
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- tom_boy_mauh - 12/09/2008
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this is amazing
consider urself lucky 2 have a guy that is this awesome instead of being a complete ******** u have a very lucky catch there............ - Report As Spam
- SilvertongueSagittarius - 12/07/2008
- just not into it. it's a bit bland. there just inst a...spark...
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- M I S H Y x3 - 12/07/2008
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Aww...I love this poem Aero! ^_^ <3 your seriously talented at writing! =D
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