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The Ocean
Have you seen the ocean?
It's the brightest blue,
And sparkles brilliantly,
Reflecting off the sunlight.
Waves foam at the tips.
Crashing down, flying in all directions.
Can you smell the ocean?
It smells like fresh breezes,
Tainted with salt.
Clean, light.
Can you taste the ocean?
It tastes shockingly salty,
To burn and somehow soothe your tongue.
Like fresh tears.
Have you felt the ocean?
It tickles when you’re in the shallow end,
Washing over your feet.
Calming when you swim in,
Carefully closing in on you.
Have you heard the ocean?
It's waves crashing,
Making claps on the shore.
You can hear seagulls above,
Squawking above.
I haven't been to the ocean in a long time,
But it one of those things that I like to remember.
So, I try. Try to remember.
All I have to do is close my eyes,
And I see the ocean again.
The Leaves
Leaves of every color soar,
Floating in a strong wind,
Creating a blur of Greens,
Reds,
Yellows,
And Browns.
They play in the wind,
A slight rustle in their wake,
Crashing into each other,
Careless and Free.
Until the wind dies.
The leaves stop their games,
Falling slowly to the ground,
Silent,
And dead.
A Candle
Atop a lavender pillar of wax,
A bright flame burns,
Casting a soft glow,
In a dim room.
The flame dances,
Flickering slightly,
Swaying to and fro,
Shivering gleefully.
A child watches the light,
Eyes reflect the graceful flame.
Wonderment and joy are felt,
As the boy breathes in a silent warmth.
The night wears on,
Though one window is lit,
With a small,
Golden,
Glow.
- by Zetta Matrix |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ll OrGaSmIc TiC-tAc ll - 12/10/2008
- uhm no offense but your type of poem writing isnt the type i really like so ya...
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- Majykk-Tayzor - 12/10/2008
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Hi! Thanks for rating my story, your poems are really good! ^w^
And I just copied and pasted my story from a different place, so some things were messed up. ^^; Sorry if it was hard to read. But, anyways, your poems are good. They are an inspiration to me! biggrin - Report As Spam
- mrbunnii - 12/09/2008
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Hello,
My name is Bryndi, and I am one of Pie's friends (ratzrule101). She accidentally gave you a poor score on this poem, right? Well, she asked me to give it a 5 for her, because she cannot change her rating, and she's so sorry!
Thanks,
Bryndi - Report As Spam
- Midnightraver - 12/08/2008
- there good but.. The Ocean is the best !!
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- OwlsRockMySocks - 12/07/2008
- really good =D
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- Nikki4815 - 12/07/2008
- nice. But you should post them seperately, so you can know which ones are strongest, and which are weakest. I like them all, though ^^ Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message" and I recently submitted "Lost in the World"
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- Zetta Matrix - 12/07/2008
- Umm, if you're going to give me a low rating, at least let me know why.
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