Maybe My Life Should Have Been

• Artist: -Auron_Kain_Phlak-
• Description: A poem I wrote a very long time ago, the other day I was relieved by the love of my life, and I feel I can now show the world this poetry.
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: maybe life should have been

I see you bleed,
your life is taken.
Now I know,
You are forsaken.

The pain inside is just so real,
I hurt, and seethe, and fill with Zeal.

I realize now, its just so dumb,
as I sit here cryring, my body so numb.
That its all my fault,
and its truly the end.

Without you here, I lose my soul,
Give it all away, for I cannot feel whole.
Was your death a sign?
Should I have been thrilled?
Maybe it was I,
Who should have been killed.

Comments

[Dissolve the Pain]

i love that..amazing 5/5

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

ohh plz keep writing i like it alot!!! 4/5!!!

[darkangel9194]

Wonderful poem, so sad.

[Experienced Virgin]

I know how you feel...truly this is a beautiful poem...

[Still Doll named Alice]

Wow.....In this poem....I see the sadness felt, very sad but beautiful poem...