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As the sun fell down, tired
The clouds and sky around it were splashed with exquisite colors,
Blazing orange,
A royal purple,
Lovely pink,
And a beautiful red,
Then,
It all faded,
And the sun was hiden behind the far away, blue, vast mountains
And a bit later,
The moon,
Silver and valor, began to shine,
Eluminating the stars around it,
To be golden yellow,
To start the night again.
- by Acire Osor |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: starlight
- Artist: Acire Osor
- Description: did it for school and wanted to put it here too..tell me if you like it or not, please leave a comment
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: starlight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ForeverNForever - 10/30/2010
- it is good maybe work on the flow of your words
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- MrAlexD - 12/08/2009
- Ehh, It could be better. I notice its about the rise and fall of the sun
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- MoButterKittyCoonBra - 08/03/2009
- its good :3 but i did notice you misspelled illuminated...but im just obsessed with spelling, lol.
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- seeyouinshell - 12/06/2008
- pretty good
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