- You said you loved me but I just said that I dont belive you and walked away. The next morning as I watch the news I feel a cape of sadness over me. The news reporter is standing outside your house and I watch in despare as the reporter said that a 15 year old male was found hung to death in his house. I pickup the phone and call you. Theres no awnser so I go to your house. When I get there I hear the reporter says that the boy was ... you. I brake down crying. I cry for hours before your mom lets me read your suicide note. It says "I really do love you Elizabeth and if you dont belive me then I have no reason to live." I go home and slit my wrist , I have no reason to live after I hurt you so much , I love you and I always have I just didnt know how to tell you. Everythnig goes black ... When I wake up you are standing over me. I stand up and hug you tightly. I whisper in your ear "I belive you now and im sorry I hurt you so much. I have always loved you."
- by DarknessAngel79 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: death
- Artist: DarknessAngel79
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Description:
i wrote this poem about my friend who said he loved me but i thought it was just because he knew i liked his best friend he didnt really kill himself but he did run away for 2 months.
Please comment and rate. This isnt the first version I always write them before I put them on the internet. My friends said it was good but I wanted a secend oppinion.
Please dont vote it a low score just becasue its emo-ish - Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Chelly17 - 02/21/2010
- Reminded me of a part of my past....very very beautiful...keep writing
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- rayne482 - 12/08/2008
- Wow, I love it. It's beautiful.
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- YAY May Day - 12/06/2008
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OMG this is so beautiful.
You're good at writing. - Report As Spam
- XxxKottonKandyxxX - 12/05/2008
- Awwww..... I had my moment that relates to this. But it was really good. 5/5
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