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My heart,
it's broken.
My life,
it's frozen.
My tears,
won't fade.
My true love,
betrayed me.
Now I'm sitting here,
dying in this hell......
- by OxOMrsLovett Meat PiesOxO |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Hearted
- Artist: OxOMrsLovett Meat PiesOxO
- Description: just letting my pain out with a poem i made....
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: broken heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Enchant3r - 12/07/2008
- Its good but it feels incomplete. The reference image kinda throws off the true essence of the poem. When love is involved pain is usually more then physical, when someone you love betrays you its a pain that cannot truly be explained.
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- OxOMrsLovett Meat PiesOxO - 12/05/2008
- thank you everyone and I'll plan on making it longer
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- Yunas broken heart - 12/04/2008
- uhh, interesting reference image... Anyway, nice it's well written.
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- the_toxic_shockartist - 12/04/2008
- it's so goo mabe you could make it longer 5/5
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- Sick-Domestic-Puppy - 12/04/2008
- its such a meaningful poem i like it5/5
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