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if life weren't so cruel I'd still be the one here in your arms right now.
slowly taking me into embrace letting me feel you warmth..the warmth i wished all my life. feelings of that have not been returned . knowing that it cant be true.
tortured by the thoughts of you and me forever maybe together. why? if it had to be like this why can't it stop. Why? because life is cruel down to the feeling of no return.Though Im living breathing i ask why wont the feelings return. fighting bickering though why are we fighting?Take me out of that embrace. The embrace that i thought i had but no longer had the chance to ever give back.The cold feelings swept away in one tear.. not only that single tear but tears that went swiftly down the cheeks of my sorrowful face. Living breathing not knowing those feelings are to be returned.Death calls upon me.take me away before i'm saved.Deep down it had to be this way. Though why? you ask. the guilt ridden upon me. i hurt you i hated you. but in the end i always envied you. I fell in love with you but where the love has gone it far in the past now look upon you i see found someone else i wished that were me as i stayed in the empty place of our memories as the butterfly of death leads me to the pathways you run towards me take me into that embrace tears running down your face for the first time.Do push away. no why? the embrace i wanted for so long finally came though too late perhaps.the embrace of warmth my heart is long gone away. Warm tears now come down my face as i feel the warm embrace upon my lips as my last good bye said to a sad face gone forever in the dreams of that were supposed to be there but never was.Not Living But breathing now knowing these feelings are to be returned.Death calls upon me.take me away before i Know i shall be missed. His face full of tears going down his cheeks screaming my name it hurts inside but feelings i knew had been returned in that single kiss.I go now leaving my heart and love to you but you tried to save me in the end think i was alive. wrong im sorry for the now i understand why you never returned the feelings.confused misunderstanding what i said though i forgave that for its my fault. Goodbye forever good riddance though that kiss was my last dance in you life.though why. i now asked. why had it been this way.What would've of happened if i lived longer? I guess those questions are never to be answered for my life is over. the last embrace of my life taken away in one disappearance. the butterfly of death takes all away
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- Title: Why did it have to end?
- Artist: Tarouchoo
- Description: Heres my first shot at a long poem comments and strong and "Help-ful" criticism is welcome please no flames >_< enjoy ~ XD~mizu
- Date: 12/03/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- TiffanyTrippout - 12/03/2008
- Ah! Second comment! Helpful criticism: Use grammar?....o_o .....;D
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- Berri Tsuki - 12/03/2008
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Mizu should use caps better. and learn to use another line at right spots for poems!!!! D<
P.S. FIRST COMMENT X3 and Hiyas. - Report As Spam