The elements

• Artist: Noche de Dulce
• Description: This is a poem of fire, water, earth and wind....or better known as elements.
  My friend also wrote a poem on it. If you'd like you can check it out and compare or w/e. We were having a competition on who could write the best element poem. of course she won, in my opinion. look up: thegrayrose
  I kind of rushed on the 3rd stanza...so only one line is on the element earth...hehehe
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: elements

It gives us heat
It gives us warmth
Amazing things
But it can hurt

When something burns
Just pour some water
It can control
An endless pattern

Lift my hair
Brush my skin
I step on you
That's how it is

Fire, Water, Earth and Wind

Comments

[Invisible Lotus]

i agree on what she said

[The Gray Rose]

good effort. its amazing