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I saw her standing over there,
Her long dark flowing hair.
Her beautiful, piercing blue eyes,
Forcing me to love, to stare.
Icy cold, like winter,
Yet comfortable like spring.
Her clothes were colourful like fall
And her hair hot like summer.
She walked toward me
With an assured pace.
Staring me in the face.
My heart started to race.
Like an angel walking towards me
She had a halo over her head.
Wanting to hold me.
She caressed my face
With her soft touch
It meant so much
To me, and it told me:
She loved me
As none had before
And I'd always love her
Forever more.
Her lips pressed against mine
I felt her against my skin.
Soft and soothing, unlike mine.
It was a beautiful sensation
I loved every moment.
It is the greatest discovery
When a person finds
That they are loved
By one
From the inside.
- Title: The Girl
- Artist: A-Class01
- Description: About a beautiful girl I used to like. She was my first crush and I'll never forget her. Don't ask who it is because I won't say a word. I hope you all like it and if it makes you think of someone, you know you're in love.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: girl crush love kissing
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Erykus - 03/05/2009
- Absolutely amazing. A person comes to mind of course I'm hush-hush about that rolleyes 5/5
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- princess_zelda3209 - 12/16/2008
- *sigh* true love poems r my favorite poems
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- suchirolle - 11/30/2008
- i love ur poem. i wish i could fall inlove like that...
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- Nikki4815 - 11/30/2008
- very sweet! Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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- Twenty Five Minutes Ago - 11/30/2008
- that was pretty!
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- Toxiic Muffin - 11/30/2008
- Aw, That's cute.
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