Me.....................

• Artist: vampire-kisses1432
• Description: This poem is about how I feel about my self and how I don't really like what I have become
• Date: 11/29/2008
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When I look in the mirror,
all that I see,
is a scared confused girl,
looking back at me.

All I feel is hate towards that girl,
and tell her she doesn't belong in this world.
It took me 10 minutes to realize that's me,
and people don't understand why I hate what I see.

What I see is someone I don't want to be,
and I don't know why,
but I hate being me..........

Comments

[BlackVeilBridesSixxxxx]

Keep writing out your feelings. Dont listen to negativity. Nice poem.

[BannedAccount8623822]

OMG tat's excatly how i feel! high five girl! XD (i act to be happy i try my best but usually it doesn't really work) love it

[Alibis of the Heart]

Hmmmm.... I like it. Kind of short, it feels like u could have gone further, but it's good. wink
It's very relatable, I feel the same way about myself.
Please take a look at my stuff if u don't mind?

[what_bout_you]

love it. keep it up

[dreamweaver33]

i love the rhyming it really helps it flow. love it

[Ai_Naru]

Sophie you are 12. You don't know what depressed and unloved is. I am. Im hated and I feel ugly and I keep my emotions locked away... Thats when you hate yourself...

[2009 helper]

i totally i agree with u .. i also feel like that...