Sorrowful antics

• Artist: demon strait outta_hell
• Description: Well, I've no excuse. I was annoyed, and i tore all of my notebook to pieces, took the pieces, and burned them in my backyard. And I really really regretted it later. So i wrote this stupid depressed poem
  Signed Aw ********, bored sucks!
  it don't have a real name
  DEMON
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: sorrowful antics

Deep sorrows engulfs my being
tearing ruthlessly through my pages
scream, and banish them unto the fire
watching them ashen and vanish to unknow smolder
The flames lick at my face
banishing with my works, my tears
Tears of rage and sorrow
smother the flames with my feet, bare as my soul
leaving painful blisters and burns
and I lay in my room, consumed with stupidity, and regret
As lifeless and worthless as the poetry I've written

Comments

[Gravetye]

This was good. I rather enjoyed reading it, especially the line "watching them ashen and vanish to unknown smolder."

[demon strait outta_hell]

uncheerful*

[demon strait outta_hell]

Thank you Zylo, for being, as usual, annoyingly unallowing to be cheerful. And Kita, for loveing it. Thank you! ^^

[Zylo the Wolfbane]

RAWR! Dammit I TOLD you you're a good writer!

signed and if you say you arent good one more time I'll stab you in the ear with a plastic spork!
Zylo the Wolfbane

[FormerlyKitaTataki]

Holy s**t! I love it! 5 stars.