gone

• Artist: XX im a bad chick XX
• Description: i feel so alone
  now that ur gone
  i sleep alone
  no that ur gone
  no one to talk to
  now that gone
  i spend long nights
  crying
  now that ur gone
  i watch mindless soaps
  now that ur gone
  i'm dead inside
  now that ur gone
  i wait and watch and wait
  for ur return
  and it seems to be evident
  now that ur gone
  as i await ur return
  i die slowly
  and realize that
  now that ur gone
  i am too
  
  
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: love feelings

i hope ya'll like my poem
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Comments

[ItJustTyo]

same as what they said, but kinda catchy i like it =]

[Izzy of the Insane]

Never, Ever, use Chatspeak in a poem, or any other literary work for that matter. Use some capitalization and you should probably space things out better. Also, it just seems way to cliche.

[Galloping_Ginger]

okay... one, learn how to type out words. its annoying. two, you got your description and your poem switched around but whateve lol. umm three, its not completely appealing to the eye. put a little more voice into it. other than that you're fine.