Now you care

• Artist: maggies_mule_02
• Description: For people who've been hurt
  
  
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: care

So now you care
Now you see the
tears falling down
my cheek you try to
wipe my cheek as i
turn away Now you
care about me & my
feelings but its too late
to care for me...




The more i get hit the
more tears fall the more
you tell me you love me
but yet you stabbed me
in my back no need to
remove the knife i'm sure
they'll be more.Watch me
fade away from you forever
the blood flowing all around
you, guess what its my blood
It's too late to care for or about
me just let me disappear on my
own Goodbye for now & maybe forever

Comments

[samantha38]

veerry good
that how many ppl feel

[Prin-nee]

wow way cool poem.. well i know it is suppose to be sad but it is very cool as in good!! but not to be mean maybe shorten the lines or maybe spread them out differntly so the thought runs more clearly!! otherwise i loves it!

[Elle the Werewolf]

good job again! try making the lines shorter, it's easier to get your thoughts and meannings out that way <3