i'm Sorry

• Artist: Afterlove2death
• Description: just something i keep thinking bout...
• Date: 11/24/2008
• Tags: sorry love

Im sorry that what i said wasn't true.
That i didn't really mean
to feel this way bout you.

That when i looked at you
i prayed that you felt that way too.

I'm sorry that when you walked
away i didn't fallow.
That you didn't turn around
And come back to me.

That when we sat together
I didn't tell you how i really feel.
That if i had maybe you wouldn't have gone.

Im sorry that as i sit here
thinking bout you.
Thinking of how you care
Bout some other girl.

Sitting, thinking.
That i still love you.
That i'm sorry i steel feel
This way bout you.

Comments

[Seatana_Dea]

it sounds very original to me. but that isnt my fight.
it is another great poem

[Afterlove2death]

the poem is supposed to have a rhythm to it. i can change it if necessary but when i wrote it sounded ok. personally it is NOT a cheap knock off of some song. the plot of it might be similar to some songs, but otherwise the poem is not the same.

[JustAPoisonApple]

Ok first off, gramma- not so good. Second I'm pretty sure I've heard something similar on the radio... could be wrong but I really think I have.

[erinalicee]

hmm... i think its awesome. you seriously have a gift. although you already know that don't you, sanji. btw you rock and the poem you wrote in french is awesome too although i cant read it. lol sweatdrop