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ALIVE
In the darkness of the night
He holds her gently
Running his fingers through her golden hair
Weeping.
She gazes into his eyes.
Her muscles seize, her spine is
Wracked and broken.
His tears fall
Cascading down onto her delicate porcelain skin.
Her strength wanes.
The strings of her corset barely rise
And fall with each passing breath.
He bargains with his god
Take me instead, I’ll do anything.
Her vision fades
Falling into oblivion.
Her last breath
Frozen in time, tremulous
Clings to the chilly air.
She expires
Succumbing to the injuries that consume her.
He wails
The sound of despair echoes all around.
He kneels and curses his absent god
Who took flight at the utmost end of need.
He screams
For the dreadful reality is seared into his mind.
He reaches for the dagger that will
Unchain his scarred and tortured soul.
Crimson regret and anguish
Gush from his sepulchral flesh.
He quivers
As the last drops of life stain the unblemished earth..
A rift is severed in the clouds.
Divine beings descend to witness
The bittersweet sight of annihilation.
Heaven’s crystalline tears flow
From the eyes of the servants of God.
Angelic hands cover the weak, helpless bodies.
The souls emerge
From the earthly flesh that held them back
And float together to the great beyond
To ensure their place together
Away from carnage and despair.
Stripped of human weakness, they’ll finally be
Alive.
- by an ornery pear |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/22/2008 |
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- Title: Alive
- Artist: an ornery pear
- Description: I got bored during class one day, and I decided to write something epic. Okay, I know it's not really epic. In fact, it's a little dark and creepy. Nonetheless, I hope you enjoy it. Please rate.
- Date: 11/22/2008
- Tags: creepy dark
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Shana Twilight - 04/14/2009
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whoa this is totally a 10!!
you rock =D - Report As Spam
- midnightmusic94 - 02/28/2009
- that is amazing!! 5/5!
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- MrCuddlesy - 01/17/2009
- Awww, that is so cute! And sweet! *luffs*
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- DiexToxSurvive - 11/23/2008
- holy cow its really good! biggrin
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