My Soul

• Artist: Tranlovescookies
• Description: Even though my work is amateurish at best, it speaks from the heart. ^^
• Date: 11/21/2008
• Tags: soul

You see who I am on the outside,
but I can't.
I'm just standing here,
waiting for my wings to form and spread
into my true self.

After every recovery
of my crushed heart,
I heal myself
with the warmth
of my friends

My reflection in the mirror
is not who I think it is.
I see a girl, but
that’s all I see.
Time after time,
Piece after piece,
I see the real me.
And my true soul began to take of
Its mask.

Comments

[Tranlovescookies]

Thankx for commenting guys! ^o^

[ArchangelTsuya]

Sometimes cliché lines are the best to express emotion, how can someone be original in their metaphors and similes now that there is so much poetry?

[CherryFields]

eh, sort of cliche. didn't seem very personal.

[Ronlad12]

touching

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

its nice. plz keep writing. can u check out my work an tell me wat u think

[November blues]

Truly something that speaks from the heart, we all give ourselves a mask sometimes to fill some void but they whom set themselves free of thier mask always find true happiness.

[Lilliaice]

Awww >o<