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"Why?"
Why did you betray me? Why did you lie to me all this time?
I asked you each time to see how you were feeling...
But all you did was lie each time...
Why did you put this hole in my heart?
It hasnt been long and already another has taken my place....
It just adds to this hole like putting salt in a wound..
My head hurts so much, my heart aches so badly...
Yet all you do is walk off with that other guy...
I know I wasnt the best...but I know I wasnt the worse...
Each time we talked I always try to make it for the better...
When you laughed...it made me smile, when you cried it made me worry..
I did everything I could to make you smile...
So why did you put this hole in my heart?
I thought you loved me, I thought I loved you too...
Yet here I am aching in pain...
So why...just why?
- by ViewtifulOtaku |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/10/2008 |
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- Title: Why?
- Artist: ViewtifulOtaku
- Description: Well the girl I loved has found another. We were together for 2 1/2 yrs and those were the happiest of my life. I know I wasn't the perfect person, but she always made me feel better by saying "You are perfect to me and that's all that matters" Each time she said that I felt like I can do anything as long as I had her by my side. So we broke up not to long ago and then I come to realize that she has already found another and it hasn't even been a whole month from that time. It just hurts alot...
- Date: 11/10/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Wonderlessnight - 05/01/2009
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I understand how you must be feeling. It's stupid how ones you love can just brush you off like you are nothing. But anyway, 5/5.
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- x0xDemondChildx0x - 11/16/2008
- omg thats real sad i can imagine your pain i lost a loved one and it hurt i wasnt able to move for a week he broke my heart.
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- MsGiggle1 - 11/12/2008
- i like it
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- tksunshine93 - 11/12/2008
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I'm so sorry hun, and I know how it feels. Two weeks after my bf broke up with me I saw him out with this other girl and it broke my heart, more than before.He told me he would never be able to replace my love, well maybe he didn't but he definitely forgot it.
Anyways...Great poem, even though it is so sad. Has great rhythm. Well done. - Report As Spam
- snowasyougo1234 - 11/11/2008
- Thats the same thing that happened to me!This Friday my boyfriend,Anthony, broke up with me.We were going out for about.....1 1/2 years.I cried all night on Friday.I am still sad but i guess he wasn't that good of a boy friend anyway.
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