loveless

• Artist: OoOo_Princess_Kairi_oOoO
• Description: its something for someone i love
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: loveless

what is life without love?
just another day?
what good does love bring?
love is the most beautiful thing a human being can experience
but what happens when u get ur heart broken?
is love good now?
is it worth it?
when u r in love and happy
u sacrifice urself for that person
u would've given ur life if needed
u gave them ur heart
but still they r blind to see the love u have for them
the things you've done for them
just for them
and to make them happy
loveless is the word people use when their heart is broken
love is the word people use when love fills their body
and mostly their heart
like i said
my love for u will b forever and ever
my love for u will never end
no matter what u do
no matter what happens to me
or how my heart is destroyed
u will always b in my heart
i will always love u forever
because i dont want to b
another loveless
who hate life
who hate love
i just want u to know that my heart will always b by ur side
even though if u dont see it
i will protect u against anyone
or anything
even if it means protecting u from yourself
for my love for u is pure
i am not another loveless
i do not hate love
i cherish it
for i am not a loveless
i am ur love

att.your snow white queen

Comments

[PhantomBlade11]

This is good but you should not use chat abriviations. It takes away from your writing

[Pyromaniac-Rebel]

You. Your. Are. Yourself. I.

I was in pain reading through all the chat speak. u r my love looks much better as You are my love. Take the extra minute to make your work all it can be. You're typing the poem for god's sake...

Your ideals on love are not quite mine, but they are interesting anyway. The flow was sketchy, the meaning powerful. You should work on punctuation, not using chat speak, and flow. But don't lose the emotion that is there.

[OoOo_Riku_oOoO]

ull need to do more then that