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some say love is the best, others comme with" its okay", but, be you girl or guy, none knows the dark side of love quite like I.
some say love makes them feel euphoric, some say its just a game, but to me, it only brings pain. the sun, people would give, but behind the moon I hid. Hid from the rejection, riduecule, the pain, from my fellings I have nothing to gain. I have befriended you, I have befriended him, and I know every singel sin. to the darkness I was cast, but still, forever I want your happyness to last.
true love, unrequited, will distroy most, killing themselves, or there loves host. but, nay, not I, you are happy with this guy, and your smile, his heart reserves, and I know that this honor, mine will never diserve.
forever, I am destined to walk the moonlit way, alone, while one the other side of the lake, your love ,all day, is shown.
I will still protect you when he is not able, but you can say its hime in your hearts fable.and if he, the one you love, makes you cry, then I will make him die.
ah, now you all see me as mad, yes? well, I said you dident know the dark side of love like I.
- by _delted_--mfrag |
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- | Submitted on 11/01/2008 |
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- Title: dark side of love
- Artist: _delted_--mfrag
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another unrequited love poem. hay, I write whats happening, not just something I make up!........ok, yea, I do that sometimes.
and, again, dont chew out spelling mistakes. why you ask? Im dislexic. plain and simple.
- Date: 11/01/2008
- Tags: dark side love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- _delted_--mfrag - 11/02/2008
- well, I am dislexic.
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- Fluxit Aqua et Sanguine - 11/02/2008
- Every one of your poems I've read has been lovely... the language in this one, expecially, is very deep and expressive. =3 The only thing I don't like is your grammar, but that doesn't seem to apply all that much in the poetry competition anyway. 5'd! XD
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- _delted_--mfrag - 11/01/2008
- no, yours was very deep
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- 11nikkianne22 - 11/01/2008
- wow now yoursd is deep.mine is nothing compared to this.wow.harsh
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