I'm like every other person

• Artist: VioletHearts
• Description:
• Date: 10/31/2008
• Tags: like every other person

Seems to me these days
People don't get along
We have friends that turn their backs
For something stupid
We have people calling each other
Emo, cutter, b***h, c**t..and so on
I'm like every other person
So whats the big deal
We all get pissed
At the stupid people who can't forgive us
To see who we really are
I'm like every other person
The days we feel like s**t
Days we feel so alive
Others it's in between
You can't change for other
it's just who you are
So we have fights over friendship, fights over realtionships,fights over break ups and fights for our mistakes
I'm like every other person
There days we seem to get along
Other we feel left out
Like days we feel loved
Days you have hate to hold you down
I'm like every other person
Why try so hard to be one thing, one emotion everyday for others
We are like every other person
I'm like every other

Comments

[Saigo Anchuu]

On the line where you continued "fights" you should have made each a line break. It's good subject matter, but you should keep a reoccurring theme as how you write it, like, syllables are good, and words per line. But otherwise good job! 4/5