Tears

• Artist: Feridust
• Description:
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: tears

Ice blue
heart encased pain
forming pearls
crystal beads
sliding down my skin

I wonder
at the beauty of forged sadness
questioning how
the maelstrom of misery
could make drops of sunlight
becoming a moment
of epiphany

Comments

[Vastrix]

Beutiful, I've written a bit of poetry like that myself and must I say you are very good. Don't stop.

[Kitten254]

it's good, but why did the tear happen, describing the tear itself(thats what it is about, i know), i just could do more, sorry

[tuxtux]

Wow, that's good. Keep writing!