Leave me here

• Artist: xx_e v ii e e
• Description:
• Date: 10/29/2008
• Tags: leave here

Sure just leave me here lying on the ground...
Whats that sound my tear drops falling...
Im here in the rain with a red sore nose
As the lightning strikes my lonley pose
You keep me here waiting for hours
You are horrible your mean and sour
Im hurting inside
You leave me to cry
I despise you
I hate you
To you im something mere

So you just leave me here

Comments

[xx_e v ii e e]

umm haha thanks, but umm I wrote this poem like 2 years ago,,,so its really old

[angelsupernova93]

not terrible though the rhyming seems forced, loosing up and maybe try a free verse, those don't rhyme and are generally easier to do and flow more freely