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Darkness follows
where I hide
hatred reminds me
of all those lies
Remember you
your smile, your face
felt that pain
every single day
Run 'till my death
'till I fall in exhaust
hope taken from me
in a world which I'm lost
Dwell upon the past
when I used to be free
No matter where
darkness will find me
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- Title: Darkness
- Artist: exhume
- Description: This is a poem I wrote about a year ago when I was upset.
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (6 Comments)
- II iSaku Blossom II - 07/24/2009
- This is very nice. You deserve a 5/5~
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- Senkita - 02/28/2009
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This is really quite good...it's short and sweet, *nods approvingly*
Excellent use of rhythm - Report As Spam
- Renata Of the Volturi - 02/28/2009
- Great poem!!!!!!! 5 starz!
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- Neopharmaphobic - 02/23/2009
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You have a really fluid and creative style. Your poem is fantastic!! Keep up the writing; if you submit anything else, I will be sure to read.
And thank you for the kind words in your comment. I really appreciate it ^^ - Report As Spam
- Tetsugen - 10/30/2008
- Im sure your a girl.... but I could be wrong which in any case this poem was great. Not so much for originality but the work and thought behind it was exquisite. Good Job 4/5 smile
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- -T I V E N I - 10/29/2008
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dude!!
i love your poem!!
nice job!!! - Report As Spam