I reject them...

• Artist: Shad0w Cloud
• Description: I realized I was treating my friends like s**t, Like how the people treat me, so I wrote this and now I've changed the way I treat them.
• Date: 10/28/2008
• Tags: reject them

Not all of them stabbed me in the back...
Only some of them had the desire to attack...
The result of my past, I do not trust...
Into a life of loneliness I have been thrust...
The result of my distrust, I push past my end...
For this, I've learned, I'll lose every friend...
Not for all of them, Bad must I feel...
Some have the desire for me to heal...
I fear too close I get, push away...
Far from me they should stray...
I fear too close, too attached...
Result of this fear, Pain has hatched...
I'm brought down, but I'm the one to blame...
they all care, I feel only shame...
I realized today Some of them I love...
These people I am not above...
Heart peircing thorns grow everywhere...
It's no longer me they can scare...
Perhaps that is all inside my head...
Not all of them wish me dead...
I know when it's my time to die...
To nowhere shall I fly...
The way I've treated them yet still they remain......
I know these friends shan't have more strain.

Comments

[apricot turtle]

Nice poem, but you like your ellipses, eh? In case you didn't know, ellipses are the "..." that you used (I didn't know that 'till yesterday so yeah....) ANYWAYS... *cough cough* I'mma just shaddup and vote now.... 5/5 ^^

[GeekyEnchantress]

wow this one is wonderful, and i can totally relate to this one.
The feeling of guilt that, that brings isn't the most wonderful of feelings but it combines with the feeling of being wanted, knowing that someone cares. I care and I want u to know that. smile I LOVE YA BABE!! and ur poetry is beautiful in the sad, depressed kinda way smile but I like it biggrin

[gabbel]

thanks for sharing that!
it helps me see from a better point of view!

[redkittikat]

nice poem smile

[babygurl2795]

oh wow! I loved your poem! it's very good!

¬Nyaa!! ;3 whee