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Though I wish you would notice
Alas, it is not ment to be…
You love another and have forgotten me…
Your heart still is his
Never to be mine
But I don’t mind
As long as I can still see your smile
You are clueless about my adoration for you
Even if you knew
my wish would not come true
Im naught but a shadow behind you
Forgotten.
Here I am standing in the rain
awaiting the return of your smile
Full of so much sunshine
It could melt a glacier as easily
As it did my heart.
When you smile
As rare as it is
Time stops
Nothing is heard
but the beating of my heart
- by RAlNBOW SKITZ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: forgotten
- Artist: RAlNBOW SKITZ
- Description: ......
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: forgotten heartbroken smile love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Llama Goes Moo - 11/01/2008
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Not bad smile
At line 6 "But I don't mind" try not using the contraction. - Report As Spam
- xxkychan - 10/26/2008
- the way it's writen is a little choppy and doesn't flow so smoothly- i think that's critical in poems.
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- NEO EVA01 - 10/26/2008
- Well said!!! I have felt the same way in the recent past and I am happy that I have found someone who can relate to the feeling.
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