your enemy

• Artist: pinconojo
• Description: second peace vote and comment said and very tradgic
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: your enemy

you are about to jump off a cliff
you hear a voice and spin around
the one you love is standing there

you coffese your love toweds eachother

you hear a gun shot you chest hearts
she screams at your wound

you see you enemy and flick him off as you fall to your death

Comments

[lvndrFox]

not being an a** or anything
but its "flip"
not "flick"
its to flip someone off
sory just a pet peeve of mine

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

Miketow is that a eal name? if not wat kind of name is THAT?

[miketow123]

ok, but watch grammar and spelling.

[pinconojo]

i come up with it off the top of my head and premade some times

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

I like it!!!!!!!!1 And yes i'm a tomboy but i'm a damn hot one!!!!!!!!! Back to the poem, i like them alot. do you just come up with this on the top of your head or did you already made them?

[yuikee]

thats so so sad but good.