What Else To Do

• Artist: l Princess Sugar l
• Description: This is something I wrote when I was kinda depressed, bored and tired. Some things had happened and I was no longer a happy camper and english was killing me, so I wrote this. Please comment so I can improve, I want to get better, but I cant do that without your feedback.
• Date: 10/24/2008
• Tags: else

I'm Sorry I blamed it on you
I didn't know what else to do
I realized that it is I that I hate
Accepting the fact way too late
I know I should just say goodbye
I don’t, fearing the tears you might cry
Wishing I could take back what I said
Desperate to untype what you read
I ask that you forgive me
For my mistakes I now see
All I bring you is pain
All your efforts now in vain
Please just let me go
It will end all your sorrow
I want you to be free
Just live on without me
I can’t do anything for you
Except graying your skies of blue
We were as pure as snow
Yet I tainted it so
At times my heart is pure gold
But that always gets old
So it turns to ice
Sadly that’s never nice
All I say is for you
I don’t know what else to do

Comments

[l Princess Sugar l]

omg thanx, i'll have to remember that next time I wirte ^^

[Sutaa Yagami]

Hey, nice poem. I would say you should use less simpler words to rhyme with; instead of turns to ice, never nice, maybe turns cold, then you'd have words like bold, sold, told, etc. Nice job wink

[AiberChan]

Very nice, touching poem =']
5/5