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My life is full of twists and turns,
With every day comes a new surprise.
With a sister who plays with death,
There is terror every moment.
Parents gone,
They've disappeared,
And know I'm all alone.
With no one to love me,
No too care
Whether I die or not
- by unicornbizzy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: My life
- Artist: unicornbizzy
- Description: A poem where I try to fit in how I feel about my life
- Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/22/2008
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Don't listen to her.
It's too short. Use metaphor or some s**t. It sounds like a damn journal entry. - Report As Spam
- Ms Make Me Smile - 10/22/2008
- good very short i think is the main problem and it could do with a bit more emotion
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