[b]the freak

• Artist: king_snake_in_shadows
• Description: this is another of my old poems its a very intence poem i think i captured how i felt very good i hope you like it
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: freak poem intence noface kingsnake

im a freak im stupid im ugly no one likes me im weird if you say that then i really dont give a ******** what you think of me i know im ******** ugly so stop telling me do u think its easy looking in the mirror and seeing my ugly reflectionbut its whats on the inside that counts thats what you say but you really dont mean ityou wouldnt go out with an ugly person a nerd or a weird person you would go out with a jock whos gorgous but if a nerd or a weird person were to ask you out you would laugh in there face you say what you dont mean so shut the ******** up and stop telling me my inperfections i really dont need them pointed out ok so leave me the hell alone[

Comments

[Runa Valda]

Not really sure about this, it's passionate and intense but it's just a rant really. And if the opinions of others didn't matter to you, I can't imagine you'd write a poem about it.

Don't get me wrong, being called ugly and a freak is horrible, I've been there, I'm just trying to offer up some constructive criticism.

[CrowleysGirl]

that was amazing! i really can comprehend it! GREAT JOB! so now im going to tell you one of your perfections... ur an amazing writer! keep writing!!!!