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Inhale -
everything changes,
the world becomes a new,
the sun come out,
the warmth fills the air
Exhale -
everything dies,
people fall,
the moon shines,
the cold air hits your back,
the night swallows you
- by Lolita Zheldra |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: Breathing
- Artist: Lolita Zheldra
- Description: this is an old poem from 6th grade.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: breathing
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Emperor of shadows - 10/12/2008
- Wow. That is compelling. I love it. Another job well done N.
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- Laedt - 10/12/2008
- Really cool. I like how you placed the words "inhale" and "exhale" too. and ah, i just found "the cold air 'hits' your back. ^^'.. you forgot an s. But really cool poem xD
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- Aisha Leglam - 10/12/2008
- It sounds really good.
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