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The darkness of this world overshadows all the light;
The classic struggle of good and bad is the battle that we fight.
No one knows just when it starts,
But this battle rages in the heart.
The radiance of love is lost in struggles every day,
When so many people are wandering and get lost along the way.
They become the outcasts--disheartened and dismayed;
The ones who once had loved them have led them all astray.
There's a fire burning deep inside,
The flames are getting hard to hide.
This fire burns within my heart,
And I know not when it will depart.
Darkness is such a scary world to live in all alone,
The fears that crowd the mind at times, the heart cannot condone.
Anger fans the flames of hate, which spreads and slowly wins,
For a heart that hurts cannot control or quench this fire within.
This fire burns both day and night,
It's a constant battle--a constant fight.
No one knows just when it starts,
But this battle rages in the heart.
- by Epic Blue Duck |
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- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: flame of darkness in me
- Artist: Epic Blue Duck
- Description: one day i was angry and i wrote this poem.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: flame darkness
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xI Pumped Up Kicks Ix - 12/22/2008
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thnxs to everyone who commented me and rated this^^.
its me in a different account.
the original was hacked
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thanks everyone.
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- Lord Haragorn - 12/14/2008
- This sounds rather epic. It flows nicely and rhymes well. The structure could be a bit better, in my opinion, but it's fine as is. You really pushed the symbolism in the poem, yet it did not grow tiresome. You're good. Keep writing.
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- MoonGodessofLove - 11/23/2008
- i love it so true
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- demonshark04 - 10/12/2008
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*speechless* wow...i mean...just...WOW..
ur rlly gud at this kinda stuff...
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