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the sand in the sunset on the beautiful beach seemed to glisten as she walked through the waves gathering seashells, and feeling the cold waves cover her feet. her feet leaving small foot prints, and her hair following the wind.
her smile calmed his heart, and her eyes mystified him. He walked over and pulled her close. whispering the last saying he'll say before leaving. "I'll love you forever" and crazed her lips with his finger.
Then placed his hand on her face. pulling her closer and gently kissing her, her face turned red. She wrapped Her arms around him.
The sunset glissened against the waves. and the winds carried the oceans smell, he kissed her one last time. he whispered in her ear "wait for me, I'll come back. Always" She tried her hardest not to cry, but tears went down her cheek and shined in the light. it was time farwell o my love and kissed each other one last time.
the years flew by and she saw no end to her wait. until she went back to the beach, and felt the same hand on her shoulder and on her waist. Her love had come back home. after fifteen years of sorrowful waiting, he finally kissed her. as he slide a ring on her finger and placed a rose in her hand. heart
- by Toxic_Pinup_ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/11/2008 |
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- Title: the last sight, Final love.
- Artist: Toxic_Pinup_
- Description: a fictional poem about a couple who are saying goodbyes. i worked hard on this one so i hope that everyone will like it. -^.^-
- Date: 10/11/2008
- Tags: last sight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- FlashFire Phoenix - 10/21/2008
- wow..... it made my heart flutter!!! >///<
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- iBrightScales - 10/14/2008
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I love it, but I think it would have been better if you would put it into stanza's.
It is very beautiful though. - Report As Spam
- Emperaror Sasuke - 10/14/2008
- It's AWESOME!!! 5/5 I agree with rainizkewl it's so romantic.
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- rainizkewl - 10/13/2008
- That Is So Romantic I Love It.
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