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Smoke wafting under the door.
My sleepy eyes open with alarm.
I cough as my feet touch the floor,
I need to get out, and fast.
I whip on a robe and run out the door,
a fire is blazing all around,
filling my ears with it's crackling sound,
as it greedily reaches out for more.
I crawl my way down the hall,
and for help I call.
The fire turned and blocked my way,
searing me were I lay.
I cried out in pain from the fiery kiss,
and was fleeing on my feet in a flash.
Straight through my window, I managed to prance,
before I remembered I lived on the twenty-eighth floor.
- by ~+Moon~Shower+~ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: A Fiery Awakening
- Artist: ~+Moon~Shower+~
- Description: A poem I wrote last night that was based on a short story I did awhile ago. ^_^;. I wrote the short story during a workshop with author Markus Zusak.
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: fiery awakening
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Gefallener_Engel_Baby - 10/16/2008
- Wonderful! I can only imagine how good the short story was. I personally don't care for the rhyming, but I loved the story line and content.
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- Naristar - 10/08/2008
- The rhymes are a bit much, but the content is good
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