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My Atlantic
You look just like her.
Open your eyes
and look into mine.
Don’t leave.
Stay until the sun sets.
You look majestic,
standing there in velvet.
Can you be any more stunning?
I feel the gaze of your eyes.
Do you feel mine?
You look surreal.
Don’t shut your eyes.
Let me swim through
them; the oceanic blue-
for you are my Atlantic.
- by xapplexpiex |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2008 |
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- Title: My Atlantic
- Artist: xapplexpiex
- Description: Tell me what you think. I'm new to poetry.
- Date: 10/06/2008
- Tags: atlantic poem
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Remnantcutie - 10/06/2008
- WOW!
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- angelmonkey10 V2 - 10/06/2008
- I have been writing poetry for awhile and that is better then anything I have ever wrote. I have a little poetry on gaia if you wanna check it out.
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