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The suns setting, a day has left the nights to come. What will be done? We cannot stop it, our fears from rising, they will awake and hunt for us, but the suns to rise in a couple of hours, so try your best and hold your breath when they come to haunt your once peaceful dreams...
The nightmare has come undone.
- Title: Nightmare
- Artist: Svninne
- Description: I made this thinking about a setting sun. Please tell me if you like it. I'm making a book of small stories and poems and I want to put this one in there. ^^ If you like it and want to use it, send me a pm. ^^
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: nightmare
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Comments (2 Comments)
- -LightCaster- - 10/04/2008
- very straightforward yet it holds back something. i like it.
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- HaIIows - 10/04/2008
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its nice ^^
i think you might be missing a ' though....
but i like how its worded.....sounds kind of old fashioned....i like the style ^^ 5/5 - Report As Spam
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