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Take the jump with a running start
If only for a moment we can fly
As we take this free fall
A free fall into the sky
Twisting and turning
Boundless through air
Abandoning useless fears
Offering up a final pray'r
Nothing beneath us
And everything above
Names soon forgotten
Just another story to write of
Jump.
- by Estranged_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/27/2008 |
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- Title: Jump
- Artist: Estranged_x
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- Date: 09/27/2008
- Tags: jump september11
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xxX3mo HeartedXxx - 01/22/2010
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i really love this peom.
its very short but very
dicriptive and meaningful.
thats a thing many people strive for.
it makes perfect sense.
5/5
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- -GracedWithPoetry- - 01/22/2010
- WOW. Very VERY descriptive.
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- Adorkable Monster - 09/27/2008
- I like it it's deep but I didn't know it was the twin towers til i saw the picture and even then it doesn't fit completely. The peopm sounds like a leap of faith maybe. 4/5 great poem just a little missed meaning
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