Your Eyes Won't Let My Through

• Artist: 4ever4given13
• Description: CHECK OUT THE BEST POEMS EVER HERE BY ME LOL ANYWAYS LOOK AT THE OTHER ONES BY ME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• Date: 09/25/2008
• Tags: your eyes wont through

Your eyes won't let my thoughts go back to sleep.
Your words draw me across 2000 miles.
I don't know you at all, and yet I know
You better than my friends of many years.

The days I spent with you are like a tape
I play, rewind, play, rewind, and play.
Whenever I remember something new,
I feel as though you touched me on the cheek.

I miss you as the grass awaits the wind,
Or as the morning sky awaits the sun.
Although I look for you in every doorway,
I find only the darkness in my heart.

Comments

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Well, your poem is better written than most. However, it's still riding on the "darkness in my heart," emo bullshit, plus your obnoxious thing in the description. 2/5