I'm Lovers with Suicide

• Artist: Lady FOS
• Description: I wrote this poem last year during my 3rd hour art class and it was just an outlet for me. Well, my paranoid art teacher disagreed and sent me to the guidance office because she thought I was suicidal.
  Well, I'm not.
  
  In my perspective, I think suicide is almost like a close companion.
• Date: 09/13/2008
• Tags: lovers with suicide

My sweetie loves me so much.
I slowly suffer with his touch.
His kisses are razor sharp cuts.
Sending my body cold as my soul shuts.
He loves me like no other.
Better than my friends and mother.
He hates me when I'm breathing.
He loves me buried where the maggots are teething.
He hates the living that keeps on going.
He loves the death rates that keep on showing.
My virgin blood is his greatest treasure.
Watching it spill is his greatest pleasure.
My heart is his reminder on when to see me.
The beats are ticks-tocks of a clock you see.
He can no longer wait anymore.
Loving me is his favorite chore.
We go out to dark and secluded areas at night.
The silent sounds of the nothingness blocks the light.
He eliminates my fears.
He embraces my tears.
He tells me to relax.
It's quiet to the max.
He tells me to close my eyes.
He tells me to say my final goodbye.

Comments

[13-Chaotic-Serenity-13]

Wow, i feel so bad with writing compared to you, my poems are nothing like that, i wish they were. i must be really bad at writing... Mine posted on here is called a thirst for fear if anyone wants to read it... ^.^

[P-Railion-U]

T-T I love it =]

[Lady FOS]

Thank you for rating and posting comments.
I will be posting more of my written poetry soon.

[xXChocolate_PenguinXx]

*claps*
beautiful.
*tear*

[Caleco]

this is very good. It reminds me a lot of my self wich i think probably isn't a good thing, but for this reason i think it's amazing

[cute_bipolarangel]

omfg this is such a good poem. its amazing and it could be even if it didn't rhyme. i loveeeeeee it

[iiCuPCaK3_x3]

well it is kinda scary tho