Untitled-Part 1

• Artist: southern constellations
• Description: This isn't as recent, but I felt a great deal of emotion when writing it. I greatly enjoy the way it turned out. So much so that I decided to write another part. Unfortunately, I am horrible with coming up with titles, so you'll have to live with Untitled. Any comments or criticism are welcome. I always have room for improvement. :]
• Date: 09/13/2008
• Tags: untitledpart

Looking at her
She's so picturesque
Concealed in lies
And ineffectual protest
Her pompous ego
Her turbulent mood
Her perfect posture
She uses to elude
An ostentatious mask
She wears on her face
An impostor of beauty
Is taking her place
She's every girls envy
And every mans lust
She holds her head high
But there's no one she trusts
So behind all the makeup
And under the lies
The girl is in agony
From her muted cries.

Comments

[rocksan11]

omg this is so deep i liked it its good really good