six feet under

• Artist: _sheena marie_95
• Description: i really dont know wat i want to tittle this ..plz liv comment if u like
• Date: 09/12/2008
• Tags: sings plays guitar

sts: 2 *Sings and plays guitar*

Water grey
Through the windows, up the stairs

Chilling rain
Like an ocean everywhere

[Chorus]
Don't want to reach for me do you
I mean nothing to you
The little things give you away

And now there will be no mistaking
The levees are breaking

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

And six feet under water
I
Do
[End Chorus]

Hope decays
Generations disappear

Washed away
As a nation simply stares

[Chorus]
Don't want to reach for me do you
I mean nothing to you
The little things give you away

But there will be no mistaking
The levees are breaking

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

And six feet under water
I
Do

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

And six feet under ground now
I
Now I do
[End Chorus]

[Brad's Guitar Solo]

Little things give you away
Little things give you away
Little things give you away
Little things give you away
Little things give you away

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

All you've ever wanted
Was someone to truly look up to you

(Little things give you away)

Comments

[Guard13007]

It's great except one thing, I wouldn't repeat the same thing over an over again 6 times like that, I'd say four at the most. There's never been a song out there that does it more than three...

[thenumberblue]

I like the lyrics a lot.
Just started playing around with singin in and playing my guitar, and the only thing is, a few little lines are a bit too wordy, but its got a good feel to it.

[~The Random Fairie~]

A good title could be six feet under. I like how you clarified that it was a song, you could work on the song layout though. I also like the feel of the lyrics. 4/5.