Always

• Artist: CariRae
• Description: I wrote this about one of my best guy friends.
• Date: 09/09/2008
• Tags: always

Always
I have to provoke your touch,
but when you do I love it so much.
Why can't you see,
the way I act with you isn't just me?

My heart leaps when I see you.
I just don't know what to do.
Tell you right out,
or speak to you round about?

I know I love you, but I fear,
your rejection, dear.
You just have a way,
of breaking hearts as only you may.

You're my best friend.
I don't want that to end.
Why can't we love?
Is it interference from above?

Every moment away,
is like dying every day.
We're so great together,
but will our relationship weather?

I just can't stand it anymore.
I have to know right now.
Love me or not,
I will always love you so.

Comments

[kamahaazi]

Contrary to what the other guy said, I found it to flow easily and I could understand the words. s0 4/5

[montanas sexy lil angel23]

Love itttttt!!!!

[coolperson45]

nice

[Helpline]

Well I can say I like the leading on you never specifically indicate who you are talking about which leaves your readers wanting more, and that is good, but when I started reading this I kind of got lost. Some things did not go together. Your poem has a great lead and good flow but there were some parts that left me clueless. But overall I give you a 3/5. Good lob =)