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I watched
As a star fell through the sky.
A single beat was calling.
A single suffocating breath
Passed beyond my lips
And into the stars.
I sat alone
Staring at it.
Watching it die
As my heart slowed and stopped,
Acutely aware as the fire above
Burst into flames anew.
I watched it fall,
Fall through the sky.
Somewhere the light in my own eyes
Followed without a thought.
It left me lying in the dark,
Dead below the stars.
Vaguely aware, was I,
Of my life's passing.
I'm so sorry
But I must say
Goodbye.
- by Tsume Rokaro |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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- Title: Falling Star
- Artist: Tsume Rokaro
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Description:
Well, this section of the arena so needed to be here before hand....if it had been, then I could have had these up here before my journal.
Anyhow, this one came to me on a whim around midnight some night a few months ago. Another of my friends liked this one so, enjoy. ^^ - Date: 09/05/2008
- Tags: falling star
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Comments (4 Comments)
- -SailorLillith- - 02/04/2009
- Absolutly amazing. I love it.
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- Tsume Rokaro - 12/05/2008
- Thank you both so much! <3
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- - Una Kimi - - 12/04/2008
- Wow. (Need I say more?) This is amazing. =)
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- SilentJ75 - 12/04/2008
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Wow... I had to read it like three times before I could even begin to comprehend the awesome.
Amazing! 5/5 - Report As Spam