What you are to me

• Artist: Darkside_To_Light
• Description: I know...It doesnt rhyme or anything lol, But I made it for a Friend who was asking a girl out, they had been out many times before and broken up but he wanted to ask her back out and he didnt know why and well he's a pretty good mate so i helped him out hee hee.
  This is written from a GUYS perspective, not a girls, so lads, if u got a special lady out there, might i say "write her a poem once in a while" it goes down EXCELLENTLY ^_^ trust me :)
• Date: 08/19/2008
• Tags: romeo juliet love compassion locers

Every winter the frost covers the fields
Every flower covered
And made beautiful by the snow
The only flower left untouched is you my love
For the winter cannot make you more beautiful than you already are

Every time icy water falls from the skies
It cries
It cries for you my love
For every inch of the sky envies you
Your beauty, your magnificence, your radiance
It shines brighter than the heavens above

Like the fair maiden, Juliet
I am your Romeo
A tale of two lovers that knew no bounds
Led to their death by the conflict of their elders;
One drank from the vile of death
One stabbed in the heart by woe
For you my love I shall die
For you my love I shall thrive
My fair Juliet wont you dance with me in my hour of need?

I need to show you what I cannot show
I need to tell you what I cannot say
You need to listen deep in my heart
For the words you long to hear

We may fight, a lot I might add
But those moments of love
Aren’t they meant to last?
To live in bliss
To live with love
I will take a step forward
And await your move

Take my hand my dear Juliet
Take my hand, and the Ending to this tale
We shall change
Not two lovers lead to death
But instead
Two lovers out of breath…

Comments

[SaintHelix]

Yeah do that, this is great!

[stinkyfrog]

wow amaizing. i really thought a guy wrote it. this is good. you should put up more. here is a really good site. itss called writing.com its an awsome place to put up poetry plus sometimes people find publishers from there or vise versa. you should check it out.