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Hand in hand we would have
walked down this old path of
ours and sat by the water while
we would watch a dove.
We would have held each other
there forever while we caress
and kiss each other. Our care for
others around us became less.
We would become so intertwined
with one another, forgetting about
all the others around us, ignoring
them as they shout.
Passion would heat up kiss after
kiss. Hands start wondering around
one another's bodies trying to find
the spot they were bound.
Soon we would be lying on the grass.
Wrapped in one anothers arms staring
at the setting sun. Whispering in each
others ears while preparing.
We would count down till the sun set, with
kisses representing every second till it went
down. We would kiss passionately with hands
searching one another until we were both content.
But there is no more of that. No more us.
No more sunsets together. No more fun
nights like that because you killed yourself.
So now it will be my turn to use that gun.
- by DoxLocation |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/16/2008 |
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- Title: We Would Have...
- Artist: DoxLocation
- Description: This is one of my favorite poetry's from 6th grade, this was 1 of my special things for 6th grade =). Please vot fair. Thank you so much =). If you think I need to anything in my poetry please feel free to tell me what mistakes I did. Once again, thank you so much.
- Date: 08/16/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MegaDeathRock - 07/22/2010
- it all looks good...great...very good (felling hit me , spelling correct , sound great)
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- Darknecia - 12/18/2008
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Correct punctuation, Correct spelling, Great terminology.
5/5 O.O - Report As Spam
- Agent_O_cokepower - 12/15/2008
- I actually don't see anything wrong with the spelling...
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- jpat16 - 12/13/2008
- 0.0 wow ending was quite blunt, and so kind of hurt you there. Other wise I loved it and you need help with spelling
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