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From grassy vales,
To sun-filles hills,
The wind sweeps through it all.
Gently blowing,
First in,
Then out.
The bobcat dances through the grass,
Gently landing with graceful feet.
Every grass, every plant,
Lightly tickles its body.
The old oak creaks in somber sleep,
As the wind gently pushes its leaves to and fro.
Towering over the bobcat, the oak shares its cool shade.
The bobcat, now tired, sleeps softly,
Not a peep in its deep clumber.
Under the old oaks leaves,
Under the bright yellow sun.
- by Haseo Hyuuga |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/30/2008 |
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- Title: Imagine
- Artist: Haseo Hyuuga
- Description: I came up with this one relatively fast. I used an anger management technique and went to a calming scene in my head. Once I unveiled this, I thought I'd put it on gaia to see what others think about my imagination. I hope you like it.
- Date: 07/30/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Akeioni - 07/31/2008
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The imagery used in this poem are very good. Its very easy to imagine a scene, and Im guessing that was a goal for you. X]
But its well done.
I am curious, does the Bobcat resemble yourself in the scene? Or is it just part of the scene?
Anywho, Good Job. =] - Report As Spam
- Haseo Hyuuga - 07/31/2008
- I am aware of the typo in stanza 1, it should be filled, not filles
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- Haseo Hyuuga - 07/30/2008
- I hope you all enjoy it.
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