When You

• Artist: XxMoonlit BellaxX
• Description: A Poem about a girl who loves her guy best friend, but her guy bestfriend loves another girl. So what else could she do? Nothing
• Date: 07/27/2008
• Tags: heartbreak love pain

When you tell me that you like her
I cheer you on, because that's what friends do
But can't you see the crack in my heart?

When you ask her out
I wish you all the luck in the world
But can't you see my tears that fall?

When you talk to her
I know you'll win her precious heart
But can't you see you've already have mine?

When you hug her tight
I take the picture for you
But you can't see I wish she were me

When you kiss her lips
I tell you that you're very brave
But you can't see the pain that broke me in two

When you tell me you love her
I wish you happiness with her
But you can't see that I'll love you forever

When you two break apart
I comfort you, and say "everything's gonna be alright"
But I can see that this cycle will begin again,
where I am never her

Comments

[Xx Net Net xX]

I love this poem
this is exactly whats happening to me
cuz he dont realize
i love him more than
his gf loves him. =(

[Pastel Purrinxe]

wow... that has (and still is) happen(ing)ed on gaia for me. crying

[curlie_friez]

that just happened to me over the sumah!!!!

[x-FlipCwalker]

Ugh.. this is liek...
So real to meeeh.. cuz this ish how i feel now.
its exactully how i feel.
this poem ish juss so real.
I love it

[sasu_shika_naru]

OMG i totally can relate

[Noelani Rules]

There's a couple grammatical errors. It's pretty good, but not amazing. Done before and not super insightful. But it's still well written and has happened before, so people can relate.

[amagicalperson]

That exact thing has happened to me a million times before.