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I'm at such a point in my life... I do not fully understand
I have direction, but no purpose
I have motivation, but no action
I have the undying urge to give and love...
I have the ideas and no material
I have milk and no ******** cereal!
- by Promotor27 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/26/2008 |
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- Title: What is THIS?
- Artist: Promotor27
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Description:
I was having a late night conversation with a friend of mine from wis.dm and this came out of it...
Friday, May 30, 2008 - Date: 07/26/2008
- Tags: direction purpose motivation love vaden
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Comments (5 Comments)
- emo skater__gurl2114 - 11/14/2009
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u write really love
ur writings I hope
u still write.There
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- mom1usa - 07/27/2008
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I love this. It's like my 19 yr old daughter and how her life is. You just nailed it so perfectly! I love the last line too. lol Please write more and enter it in the arena, I would love to read it. It's just so different from the other styles here now.
I give it a 5. surprised ) - Report As Spam
- Lustnmisery - 07/26/2008
- the last line is totally random which rocks in my opinion so i give you 5*'s
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- Promotor27 - 07/26/2008
- Thus me rating my own writing as a 3. It was at like 3am that I was having this conversation and it was a little comic relief for an otherwise morbid chat.
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 07/26/2008
- the last line killed it. it was gonna get a 4 but now it's a 2
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