Complaints and cries

• Artist: Alphabetical Elegancies
• Description: something i just made up now. Idk how it'll sound to you or anyone, but, i'd like to hear what you have to say :D
  
• Date: 07/24/2008
• Tags: lyricsstrugglesscreamingcrying

An old lady screams in my ear.
Mother, grandma?
I'm sure i can hear

A complaint about me.
My frowns,
My style,
My mind,
My sense of seeing.

She's still screaming.
The reason I'm still crying.
Crawling under imaginary rocks,
hiding from the world.
Hiding from her.
Hiding from them.
Hiding from me.

A complaint about you.
My mind yelling to stop them.
Your uselessness,
Mine included.
i think later I'll do... something.

She's still screaming.
The reason I'm still crying.
Crawling under imaginary rocks,
hiding from the world.
Hiding from her.
Hiding from them.
Hiding from me.

So why does life be this way?
There's no say in it.
And there's not a say or way to stop it.

She's still screaming.
The reason I'm still crying.
Crawling under imaginary rocks,
hiding from the world.
Hiding from her.
Hiding from them.
Hiding from me.

She'll stop screaming
I'll stop crying
Crawl out.
See the sun.
Come to them
Come to me.

Comments

[shawnagirl]

sometimes i feel like crawling under rocks and crying but this makes me feel like someone knows how i feel

[Adrian Sage]

^^ For some reasons I was amazed by the formulation "crawling under imaginary rocks!"
Quite great!^^

[Sincerely Metalhead]

got a jazzy feel to it...its a good song, but i think your verses are just a tad short...shoot, your chrouses are longer than them...anywho, i give it 4 stars...im a songwriter myself so im simply critiquing! i have my own song in here as well, just search Breakout and plz comment and vote!

[death_on_swift_wings901]

too true 5/5