The Story of My Friend

• Artist: mrs.emo_urie
• Description: This is a poem i wrote for one of my friends funeral. She commited suicide. No one had any clue she was suffering inside.I found her in her house the next morning laying on the floor. Her parents are doctors. they stayed at the hospital over night apparently. I just cant help thinking amybe if they had been there Isadora might still be alive. But anyways its not their fault. And we were all just so sad. But this is a poem especially for her. Isadora Felding R.I.P
• Date: 07/24/2008
• Tags: suicide isadora

This is a story
About one sad lonely gurl
Never had fame or glory
Had no place in the world

Her parents didn't care
She had no one at all
Her smiles became rare
And things started to fall

Around her everyone was happy
Smiling and true
She thought this was sappy
Because no one knew

So she hid herself away
Deep into depression
Her mind started to decay
And cutting was an obsession

One night it was real late
And she cut to deep
She knew she had met her fate
And drifted into sleep

Her blood was pouring
Onto all of it
And in the morning
Anything red fit

She didn't regret
What she had done
This was destiny she met
In the early morning sun

Please remember this tale
All of my friends
Becuase if all else fails
This could be your end

Comments

[Bannana Vampire]

Damn that was truly inspiring.

[Cloud_Cookie]

It is very nice. i am not a rhyming person myself(i think it's too hard), so that was really good. I am sorry for your loss.

[ProphecyWillow]

it was a good poem I really liked it,but you misspelled girl.

[Chimera_Crasher]

Wow, I'd give this an Infinity/5 if i could
The poem is perfect with linquistic skills
And who can read this and not mourn?
5/5

[Rachmaster67]

That is sad for someone to die in such a manner, thinking that,that's the only way out. I bow my head silence for your friend........It was a good poem and I'm sure she would enjoy the fact that someone understood.